Saturday, December 4, 2010

Guest Writter Camille West, in: "A Melting Breath"

Dedicated to, and regarding Cami's grandmother, the late Lynda Stevenson :] 
A Melting Breath
Laying in bed
She's hanging onto a thread
People take her away
To a place she may lay
With a melting breath
She uses her support
For just as she may
Melt away
Using support for another day
Her color starts to fade away
I leave
Just knowing she'll be fine
Because she's mine
Her color comes back
But her melting breath is of more lack
At 10 to 7
A melting breath is no more
It's just a puddle
A puddle of my love
                        By: Camille West
Thanks to Camille for Being a Guest, and for sharing her writing experience. :]
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6 comments:

  1. NauticaDecember 7, 2010 at 12:53 AM

    Wow! So koolie Camille! You're the aid to kool! (＾ｰ^)ノ

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  2. AnikiDecember 7, 2010 at 4:11 AM

    "OOOH YEAH"
    (Get it?)

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  3. NauticaDecember 7, 2010 at 11:28 PM

    haha! Yeah! Just don't go crashing through any walls(it might hurt)! (^u^)

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  4. AnikiDecember 8, 2010 at 11:22 AM

    "Oooooooh Ye--"
    *thud*

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  5. NauticaDecember 10, 2010 at 1:46 AM

    Haha!! (⌒▽⌒)

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  6. AnonymousDecember 15, 2010 at 12:53 AM

    hey, thanks trev. i appreciate it.
    your cousin camcam

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